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Hint 1: Think before you write............................................................................................................................... page 3
Hint 2: Focus on the reader — be direct and interesting ....................................................................... page 4
Hint 3: Get your document into shape............................................................................................................ page 5
Hint 4: KISS: Keep It Short and Simple.................................................................................................................page 6
Hint 5: Make sense — structure your sentences ........................................................................................... page 7
Hint 6: Cut out excess nouns – verb forms are livelier ............................................................................ page 8
Hint 7: Be concrete, not abstract .......................................................................................................................page 9
Hint 8: Prefer active verbs to passive — and name the agent.................................................... page 10
Hint 9: Beware of false friends, jargon and abbreviations ...................................................... page 11
Hint 10: Revise and check ...................................................................................................................................... page 14
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